This is a very special Fantasy
Friday for me. When my very first Cassie story went up, as a guest post on ‘My
Bottom Smarts’, a lovely man left a comment – nearly eight years and after a
total of 2,222 posts (counting all three of my sites) later, Paul has remained my
friend. He has commented on nearly each and every one of these posts. That’s
loyalty beyond what most people can imagine.
He is now sharing some of his
stories with us for Fantasy Friday. He wrote these a while back, sadly real
life doesn’t give him the time to write any more, but he has shared several
with me. Today’s story will be continued next Friday.
A
Summer Miracle.
It was the summer of ’57.
I had just been posted from Libya back to
Blighty.
I was expecting to be posted to a REME or RAOC depot
as my field was safety, explosives and ammunition.
Instead of which I was seconded to the War office to help
in the recruiting drive, as one of the youngest Warrant officers in the army.
I used to visit the better class schools in the London
area and talk to the fourteen year olds who might be interested in a career in
The Royal Army. At this time the official school leaving age was fifteen.
I’m due to give a talk in, lets call it St Stephens
Grammar School, all the pupils who might be leaving school after their next
birthday attend, I like to think it was voluntary.
I give my usual talk, about the training
opportunities, but especially about the education the army offered. I told them
that I left school at fourteen with nothing under my belt except a willingness
to learn and an expectation of hard work, I told them that I stood before them
with such good qualifications that any University would accept me, could I but
afford it. The Service also offered saving opportunities, so in fact I would be
able to afford it, just.
I threw the floor open for questions, there were
questions about what unit to join, and as always lots of questions about the
Marines and Red Berets, very few questions about education.
Suddenly a clear young voice broke the silence. “Excuse
me Sergeant-Major,” I looked up in surprise, I’m rarely addressed by my correct
rank at these meetings, “yes young lady,” there was a smile in my voice.
I looked down at the teacher chairing the meeting, “Melody
S,” she said.
“Yes Melody,” “Mel if you wouldn’t mind sir,” ”not a
problem Mel,” I replied. For some reason my heart skipped a beat, Mel proceeded
to ask some well thought out questions, which led me to believe that she knew
the answers and was testing me, this wasn’t the first time this had happened,
she really knew her stuff, fortunately so did I. “One last question sir,” she
asked, I looked down at the teacher, she held up five fingers, “OK, but make it
brief,” just then the bell rung, there was a scraping of chairs, suddenly a
stentorian bellow cut through the noise, “hold still, say thank you to
Sergeant-major Paul and go quietly.” “Thank you sir,” they said, and filed out
slowly, all except one.
I looked at the teacher, “that voice would do justice
to a parade ground,” “thirty years teaching,” she smiled.
She turned to the girl; I really looked at
her for the first time, 5‘0” in her shoes, shining brown hair, sparkling green
eyes and the face of a William Bouguereau angel and possibly the most kissable
lips I’ve ever seen. The teacher spoke to her as if she were a normal mortal
woman, “well Mel more questions, doesn’t your father answer yours,” “he has
taken to avoiding them miss,” the teacher turned to me, “Brigadier General S is
Mel’s father,”opps I thought to myself, the boss.
Mel turned round and saw a woman standing
at he door, “good mum’s here, come and meet her sir, she doesn’t bite.”
Mel started off almost running, her mother
gave an almost imperceptible shake of her head, Mel stopped, turned and waited
for me; we approach her mother together, “mother this is Sergeant-Major Paul,
he is here to try and persuade us to join the army, did daddy send him,
Sergeant-Major my mother Mrs S,” a slight bow, “ma’am, a pleasure to meet you,
you have a vivacious daughter not to mention intelligent,” “you are very
welcome sir and thank you, she can be a little trying, I smiled, “ fourteen,” I
said. She nodded ruefully.
Mel was almost dancing on the spot, “mother
please invite him to tea, there is so much I want to ask him,” “really Mel, you
know better,” she looked at me, “will you,” I nodded, “if it’s not
inconvenient.”
We arrived at their home after a brief and
quiet drive, Mel’s younger brother and sister and Mel got in the back with
them. Mrs S drove straight into the garage and we entered through the kitchen
door.
After feeding the children a glass of milk
and a plate of biscuits she sent them off to do their homework
Mrs S sat me down with a glass of homemade
lemonade, she questioned me thoroughly, in short order she knew almost as much
about me as I did. “You know who Mel’s father is,” she asked, “yes he is
Brigadier General S and my commanding officer,” “does this bother you?” “I
didn’t expect to be invited to his home, otherwise no.”
She started laying the table for tea, “may
I help,” “yes, plates, cups and saucers in the dresser, six sets please” the
table set with bread, butter, chess and various savoury spreads, this done Mrs
S pressed a bell push and shortly afterwards I heard the clatter of three
children approaching. They entered the kitchen, saw me, and silence fell, you
could almost hear the clang.
Mel sat opposite me, her green eyes were
wide and devouring, when I looked into them I felt as if I was drowning, I
found it very hard to concentrate on what was being said.
Mrs S was speaking, “Paul,” “yes,” “you are
an orphan, do you know anyone in London,” “not really ma’am.” “My husband was
talking about you the other day, he said that you were possibly the loneliest
soldier under his command,” I looked at her in surprise, “the general said
that.” You’re surprised,” “not really, I’ve been in service five years, he’s
the best officer I’ve ever served under.”
“I have a proposition for you, we have a
fully furnished small flat over the garage, the general would like you to use
it, I’ll show you.” She led me through the garage to the back where there were
stairs leading to the first floor, a neat little apartment, a living room a
nice bedroom, a small kitchen and a very modern bathroom. Being used to making
quick decisions I said, “It’s wonderful, I’d like to move in over the
week-end.”
Once back in the main house we sat and
discussed the house rules, the children not allowed in the apartment and no one
night stands please, her way of saying no whores please.
I said good bye and made my way back to my
lodgings, my head in a whirl, when I finally fell asleep it wasn’t the flat
that I dreamt about, but Mel’s wonderful and dangerous green eyes.
To be continued.
© 2008 Paul
Paul thank-you for your loyalty,
your friendship and for sharing your stories with us, I’m looking forward to
posting the rest over the next few weeks.
While Paul’s gift will keep us in new stories for now, I always need
more and if you are willing please sent your story to elisspeaks@yahoo.com
Hi PK, and thank you Paul, I am looking forward to part two.
ReplyDeletelove Jan,xx
This wss great Paul, looking forward to part 2! Thank you PK for bringing us another wonderful story.
ReplyDeleteHugs
Roz
PK,
ReplyDeletethank you for posting this, I hope everyone enjoys it.
Mel is fiction, Sargent-Major Paul, not so much.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.
I understand that Mel is fictitious, I understand that for Cassie an and her friends too - but still, Mel, Cassie and the gang are as real to me as many of the people I see daily. They are my fantasy and I'm going to keep on enjoying them. Love you Paul!
DeletePK and Paul - that was great and I look forward to more. Thanks so much. There is always a little bit of real life and characters in fictional writing isn't there. I know there is in mine. After all, we write what we know.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, thank you! I'm looking forward to next week's continuation of the story.
ReplyDeleteTake care,
Meg
Paul,lovely, thank you. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeletePK, thanks.
Love,
Ronnie
xx
Great start, thank you Paul
ReplyDeleteGosh Paul I love this! Thank you, I can't wait for the next part!
ReplyDeletePK thank you as always!
Love it! Can't wait for the next!
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Tia