Another Saturday full of
snippets has rolled around, and I'm happy to be participating again in Saturday Spankings. I’m afraid my TBR list is growing at an alarming rate. I’ve
been putting up snippets from Cassie’s
Space, coming in December and also from many works in progress. There is a
lot of Cassie in my head. Today's snippet is from this first book.
This time Cassie has gotten herself if more hot water than
ever. She knew from the time she began this deception, that Tom would be
furious if he ever found out. She’s lied and kept him in the dark for months,
but she knows she can’t keep it up. She’s decided its time to come clean, but
its not easy. She had planned to tell him as they drove to their vacation
destination, but she just couldn’t make herself begin. Now, at dinner, she still she hasn’t managed to say a word.
At dinner the
food looked superb, I tried to eat, but I just couldn’t. I felt like my throat
was closing up. I moved the food around on my plate as Tom ate. When the waiter
asked if we’d like dessert I quickly shook my head no. Tom often teases me that
my favorite part of dining out is the desserts. I could feel him looking at me
as I stared at my plate.
“Cassie? You
haven’t eating a thing and you're so quiet. What’s wrong?”
My heart began
pounding as I realized I’d reached the moment of truth. “I have something to
tell you.” I managed to get out.
I don’t know
what my face looked like. But Tom immediately asked, “Are you sick, is
something wrong?”
I shook my
head no. Tom looked at me a minute longer, then finally said, “It’s not
something little is it, Honey?”
Again I shook
my head no.
I could tell
Tom was tense as he paid the bill. We didn’t talk on the way back to the hotel.
Tom held my hand as we walked, a good thing. I was fighting the urge to bolt.
Please go by and check our all the other great snippets.
I love Tom's consideration for Cassie. He might not like hearing what she's about to tell him, but he obviously cares very deeply for her. Great snippet, PK.
ReplyDeleteKathryn,
DeleteI always want the love the two of them share to be the strongest emotion in the story. Thanks, Kathryn.
What made me laugh is the detail about enjoying dessert more than the meal. Reminds me of a friend who eats his dessert in the restaurant and puts most of his meal in a doggy bag. Those little details are what make Cassie's story come alive. You've got such a nice voice in these stories.
ReplyDeleteAna,
DeleteCassie's personality and idiosyncrasies are so well know to me. I'm glad she comes across as real to others. Thanks for coming by Ana.
I need to know what's bothering her. It's clear that it's something serious.
ReplyDeleteTom's concern only adds to my curiosity.
Tasty little tease, PK.
Thanks, LA. Cassie knows Tom will view it as serious so I guess she better.
DeleteI like the line "it's not something little, is it honey" but yet he doesn't press her in public, he's willing to wait... Lovely details
ReplyDeleteTara,
DeleteYou know how many characters simply write their own lines and we just take dictation. I felt the same as you when I first hear Tom say this.
PK,
ReplyDeleteyour tasters are very appetizing.
It's taken me a lifetime to learn patience, I need it now.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.
Paul, my dear friend. I love that Cassie and I are helping you practice a life long lesson.
DeletePK you tease. The connection between Tom and Cassie is palpable and makes me crave more but your tell me I have to wait until December? Not fair I say! 8 sentences each week is not enough to satisfy my hunger for more of this couple. I love them already.
ReplyDeleteMaddie,
DeleteYou just made my day! I feel the same about Cassie and Tom. I'm having a pretty hard time waiting until December too.
Such a dreaded moment -- when one has to confess.
ReplyDeleteCara,
DeleteTrust me, it's not something Cassie does often. I appreciate you coming by.
beautiful scene :) I love how he holds her hand. Can't wait 'til this comes out so I can read her confession and his punishment
ReplyDeleteJoelle,
DeleteHe loves her to death no matter what's she's done. But that sure doesn't make the spanking any less intense.
She wants to bolt...hmmm. Makes me want to know. What is it?!
ReplyDeleteSuzy,
DeleteCassie usually waits until she gets caught, the idea of telling on herself is really freaking her out.
Wonderful build here, PK! The waiting is the hardest part for her, and the best part for us!
ReplyDeleteEmily,
DeleteKnowing what's coming is killing her - not only the spanking, but Tom's anger and disappoint.
I love that he is so worried right now, but trying to be strong and supportive.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
Katherine,
DeleteThanks for coming by. Tom will always support her, but he can't imagine what's going on.
I want to know what she's confessing. You're building such suspense. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteNormandie,
DeleteLOL, I think Tom felt the same way. Glad you came by, thanks.
I don't think I could wait to spill the details after admitting there was a secret. Can't wait to see what she's hiding!
ReplyDeleteTabaitha,
DeleteI hope people still want to know in December. Knowing what the spilling of this secret could cost her, she more than willing to wait.
I love to read so much emotion and buildup knowing what's coming. So nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Natasha, sometimes it's hard to write because I can feel Cassie's emotions so well.
DeleteWhoever said confession is good for the soul probably wasn't married to a spanker. :) Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteBoy Celeste, you sure got that right! Confession does not come naturally to Cassie, good for her or not.
DeleteAw, poor Cassie, you really showed her anxiety over coming clean.
ReplyDeleteRenee,
DeleteYes this secret coming out has Cassie worried for sure. Thanks for coming by.
Oh no- why must you end there? How long until we see more? Wait? You were supposed to tell us about her swollen feet!
ReplyDeleteAbbie,
DeleteI can't tell you all Cassie's secrets - who would buy her books if I did that, LOL! I'm really jumping around in her stories grabbing something from her and another from there. Hopefully, it will be years before the end to all the snippets will be told - is that mean?
Lovely snippet PK. It’s left me very curious to know what she’s done. I’m glad that he didn’t press her though and he’s giving her the chance to tell him in her own time :)
ReplyDeleteConstance,
DeleteIn spite of being too strict about some things, Tom is a real jewel. He loves Cassie so much
Oooh are you going to reveal her secret?
ReplyDeleteKiwi,
DeleteOn yes, the first book will reveal this. You just have to wait until December.
Great snippet PK, I love the level of detail and how you really bring out her anxiety. Also love how Tom doesn't pressure her to spill the beans.
ReplyDeleteI'm with the others. Curious minds want to know what it is!
Hugs,
Roz
Thanks Roz,
DeleteI'm glad you can feel her anxiety and I'm hoping you will be curious enough to get the book.
Wonderful segment. I really need to know what she's confessing. I hate the waiting! Argh! :)
ReplyDeletePatricia,
DeleteYou hate the waiting? I've wanted to publish this 'story' in my head for more than forty years - I'M tired of waiting too! LOL
I love the build up here. The tension is just sizzling!
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by Sue, the tension wasn't the only thing sizzling that night.
DeleteMan I can just picture the tension when they get to the hotel. If I know them both the end is clear!
ReplyDeletePoor Cassie and Tom...when she doesn't want dessert...it's serious! You can really feel the tension!!
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Cat
I'm excited to see what she's been up to, but I have the feeling he's going to spank the truth out of her.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness there is so much tension in this scene! Beautifully done!
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