It's Friday again. I'm coming up on a very busy time of my summer. I host our family reunion every summer and that means a full house for next weekend and getting that last minute cleaning done before they descend on us. But don't worry - not only do I we have a great story for you today, I'm going to have a double hitter next week.
Todays story is by Switchy and Turtle Dove, I love how they wrote it. I'll let them tell you - We started the story as a challenge to each other. We wanted to see what kind of mess we could leave for each other, what the other person would do with the scene we had created. About half way through the process we realized that the story was going to be about Mel's first spanking and we ran into an issue about the spanking not being consensual. At that point we had to decide if we wanted to go back and rewrite part of the story, or if we were going to scrap the whole story. After a couple rewrites we felt comfortable enough to carry on. The story was interesting to write because it constant changed direction. There was no way to plan what we wanted to write, we simply had to respond/react to what was already on the paper.
Todays story is by Switchy and Turtle Dove, I love how they wrote it. I'll let them tell you - We started the story as a challenge to each other. We wanted to see what kind of mess we could leave for each other, what the other person would do with the scene we had created. About half way through the process we realized that the story was going to be about Mel's first spanking and we ran into an issue about the spanking not being consensual. At that point we had to decide if we wanted to go back and rewrite part of the story, or if we were going to scrap the whole story. After a couple rewrites we felt comfortable enough to carry on. The story was interesting to write because it constant changed direction. There was no way to plan what we wanted to write, we simply had to respond/react to what was already on the paper.
Welcome Home
Mel swerved into spot 231 on the upper deck of her condo
parking lot. She threw the car into park and jumped out grabbing her purse as
she went. Pulling her coat more tightly around her, Mel rounded the car and
popped open the trunk. She grabbed the lone bag that was there, slammed the
trunk and headed for the elevator. Doing a little dance against the cold, she
hit the down button and waited impatiently for the elevator to arrive.
After what seemed like forever the elevator got there and
Mel pressed the button for the 8th floor. She needed to get to her condo fast
to get off her feet and get a stiff drink. It had been a long couple days.
First, the client she was supposed to be meeting with got sick and never showed
up to their meeting. Then her flight back home got cancelled due to the
weather. Of course this meant Mel had to wait 5 hours for another flight. It
was now nearing one in the morning and Mel was not in a good mood. She had
hoped to get back sooner so she could see her fiancé.
After
pouring herself a grey goose vodka martini and putting on her strawberry fuzzy
pajamas, Mel climbed into bed and fired up her laptop. It might have been one
in the morning but her mind was anything but tired. Hopefully, the martini
would help make quick work of that.
Mel
opened up her e-mail and noticed she had a message from her fiancé. That’s strange, Mel thought. Normally he just texts me, after all, I
have my phone on me all the time. Mel took her phone out of her pocket. Well that explains it! Her phone was
dead. She knew it must have died fairly recently because she had just checked
it before she got in the rental car to drive home. Mel put her phone on the
charger and went to see what her fiancé had said.
My darling Mel,
My darling Mel,
I
missed you this weekend and had hoped you would get home sooner so that I could
see you tonight. I sent you a couple of
texts a bit ago but you never responded. Must be your phone died. Did
you forget to put it on the charger again? Well, text me when you get home so I
know you arrived safely. I love you and can’t wait to see you.
Love your fiancé,
Jace
Mel
powered up her phone and downed the rest of her martini. While her phone was
coming back to life she wandered into the kitchen for another drink. It really
had been a long and hellish couple of days. Just as she grabbed a bottle of
wine she heard the lock to her condo being opened. It was after one in the
morning. She knew it had to be Jace or her mother and she could only pray it
was the first, though she didn't understand why he would be showing up at this
hour. Leaving her wine on the counter she reached the front door just as Jace
was closing it behind him. Dressed in jeans and a T-shirt he looked disheveled
like he had just woken up.
"Jace!
What are you doing here? It's so late!" Mel said throwing herself into his
arms.
Jace wrapped his arms around Mel and held her close.
Jace wrapped his arms around Mel and held her close.
“Darling,
you’re home! I woke up and saw that it was one and you had not texted me yet.”
He replied. “I got worried and figured I would come over and wait for you.”
Jace
gave Mel a kiss and looked relieved to see that she was home safe and sound. It
was then that he saw the vodka, wine and glass sitting on the counter.
“Just how
long have you been home and not texting me back?” his mood suddenly shifting
from relieved to angry.
“Jace, I
just…” Mel started.
“Just had
enough time to get into cute pajamas and start drinking?” he spat at her.
Mel could
tell Jace was pissed. She knew she had to choose her next words very carefully.
“I’m so sorry I had one drink Mister All High and Mighty!” she unleashed. Jace looked stunned as she continued. “I am so sorry I forgot to charge my phone and you couldn’t get a hold of me for five minutes! I’m so sorry that after waiting in an airport for 5 hours all I wanted was to get into something comfortable! I’m so unbelievably sorry that I wanted a drink to help me sleep!” Mel pushed away from Jace and stormed off to her room making sure to slam her door behind her.
“I’m so sorry I had one drink Mister All High and Mighty!” she unleashed. Jace looked stunned as she continued. “I am so sorry I forgot to charge my phone and you couldn’t get a hold of me for five minutes! I’m so sorry that after waiting in an airport for 5 hours all I wanted was to get into something comfortable! I’m so unbelievably sorry that I wanted a drink to help me sleep!” Mel pushed away from Jace and stormed off to her room making sure to slam her door behind her.
Jace
stood in the middle of the kitchen shocked and speechless. How dare she give
him that attitude! He was only concerned about his fiancé’s well-being. Was
that such a terrible thing for him to do? No it wasn’t, and honestly, it upset
him that she would behave this way.
Jace
walked over to the sink and took a wooden spoon out of the dish drainer. His
fiancé was going to learn a very valuable lesson. If she wanted their
relationship to last she could not treat him the way she just did no matter how
upset and stressed she was at the moment.
Tucking
the spoon into the back pocket of his jeans, Jace headed for the bedroom. Mel
knew that Jace had spanked some of the women he had been in relationship with
before but he had never spanked her.
Jace
found Mel tucked completely under the covers head and all, bawling. He gave a
heavy sigh, took off his socks and shoes and climbed in next to her. Gently, he
pulled the covers away from her face and wrapped his arms around her.
“Hey
now,” he said holding her, “What are all of these tears about?”
Mel
continued to sob as Jace held her close. “I had a rough weekend and needed to
relax. Then you come over just as I was charging my phone to message you and
you start yelling at me. How do you expect me to react? Do you really expect me
to be all calm and cool? Well, I sure as hell wouldn’t expect that!”
Jace couldn’t believe what he was hearing. He tried to talk calmly and rationally to Mel yet she was still giving him that damn attitude. This has got to stop right now. He thought.
Jace couldn’t believe what he was hearing. He tried to talk calmly and rationally to Mel yet she was still giving him that damn attitude. This has got to stop right now. He thought.
“I do
not like the attitude you are giving me young lady. I do expect you to be calm
because that is respectful and as your fiancé you should respect me. Now I did
not want to have to resort to this but you have given me no choice.”
Jace
helped Mel out of bed and stood her up in front of him. Mel knew right then
exactly what he planned to do. “No Jace stop!” she begged. “You can’t do this.”
Jace
looked at his fiancé with a sad look in his eyes. “You deserve this Mel. The
way you just treated me is unacceptable, don’t you agree?” Mel looked down at
her feet and Jace put his hand on her chin to lift her head back up. “I asked
you a question Mel. Please answer me.”
“Yes
Jace, I guess I do deserve this but…”
“But
what, hun?”
“It’s
going to hurt really bad.” Mel whispered and Jace felt bad for her but he also
knew that this would be good for Mel.
“Yes
it’s going to hurt, but you will be forgiven after and it will be over. Are you
going to accept your punishment now?”
“Yes
Jace.” Mel answered. “I am so sorry. Please forgive me.”
Jace
pulled Mel close and gave her a tight hug. Then with his arms around her, he
slowly slid her pajama bottoms down.
“Over my
knee now,” Jace said as he helped Mel across his lap. “I love you, but you have
to respect me too Mel.” And with that he gave her the first harsh swat with his
hand.
Jace
started slowly, first on the right cheek, then on the left and back again. Mel
was making a few small noises but Jace could tell he wasn’t over doing it.
Tightening his arm around her, he quickened his pace.
“Jace!
Ow! Okay, I get it! I’m sorry!” Mel whined as she began to fight to be
released.
“Sweetheart, we are only getting started.” Jace promised, continuing to rain down swats on her panty clad bottom.
“Sweetheart, we are only getting started.” Jace promised, continuing to rain down swats on her panty clad bottom.
After a
couple minutes of spanking, Mel began to stop fighting and Jace stopped resting
his hand on her back. Rubbing her back slowly he said, “We are going to take
your panties down now Mel. Normally, I would have spanked you bare from the
beginning but this is your first spanking and I didn’t want to overdo it.”
“Please
leave them on Jace.” Mel begged.
“I am
sorry Mel” he replied. “I need to make sure you learn this lesson. Jace lifted
Mel up and pulled her panties down to her ankles then laid her back over his
knee. He pulled the wooden spoon out of his pocket and rested it on Mel’s bare
bottom.
“What
is that?” Mel asked trying to look behind her at what Jace had.
“It is
a wooden spoon.” Jace replied lifting the spoon up and bringing it back down
several times on Mel’s already warm bottom.
“Owwww.”
Mel cried out. “Please I won’t disrespect you again. Please no more Jace.” Jace
lifted the spoon and brought it down again.
“That
is right Mel.” He said. “You SWAT will SWAT not SWAT disrespect SWAT me SWAT
again. SWAT SWAT SWAT. You understand?”
“Yes,
Jace I understand. Please no more!” Mel cried and Jace rubbed circles on her
back.
“Ok
sweetheart we are almost done then.” Jace lifted his knee so that he could
reach Mel’s sit spots and brought the spoon down ten more times on each spot
and then again on her upper thighs. He laid the spoon down on the bed and
helped Mel get up and sit on his lap.
“It’s
all over now. You are forgiven”. He told her with a hug.
Mel clung
to Jace crying. As she started to calm, Jace kissed her forehead. “Doing ok
sweetie?”
Mel lifted her head, “You spanked me.”
Mel lifted her head, “You spanked me.”
Jace
chuckled and held her tight, “Yes, I did. You were sassy, disrespectful and in
a bad mood. I bet you feel better now, don’t you?”
Mel
thought for a moment, “Everything except my butt feels better.” She whined with
a small smile.
Jace
laughed and stood up, helping Mel off his lap. He flipped back the covers to
the bed, “Lay face down and leave your butt bare.”
“What?
No….. Please….” Mel started to fight. She was afraid Jace wasn’t done.
“Hey,”
Jace said, grabbing Mel’s face so she would look at him, “trust me.”
In that
moment Mel realized she trusted Jace no matter what. She was in love with him
and if spanking was part of the deal, she would take it.
“Yes sir,”
she whispered lying down.
Jace
pulled her pajama bottoms and panties all the way off. He reached over and
grabbed the lotion from her night stand. Slowly, he rubbed some lotion onto her
sore bottom and then pulled the covers up around her.
“See, not
so bad.” Jace chided as he rounded the bed taking of his jeans and shirt,
leaving a trail behind him as he went. He climbed into bed and pulled Mel
close.
Mel was
almost asleep, “Jace?” she whispered sleepily.
“Yes?” he
said gently rubbing her back.
“Are you
going to spank me again?”
“Probably,”
he answered honestly.
“Good,”
Mel murmured.
With one
last kiss to Mel’s forehead, Jace smiled as he drifted peacefully to sleep.
~o~
I think you both did a great job and I really appreciate you sharing your writing with us. Think about this folks - if you're nervous about writing one yourself, try writing one with a friend. Seems like it would be lots of fun. Please send you stories to elisspeaks@yahoo.com
I loved this. thanks to all the people who made it happen :)
ReplyDeleteSwitchy and Turtle Dove,
ReplyDeletenow that is the sort of ending I really like.
PK, nice one.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.
This was great Switchy and Turtle Dove, I loved it! Very nicely done :)
ReplyDeleteThanks PK for bringing us another wonderful story. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Roz
Loved your story Switchy and Turtle Dove, but had I been Mel I'd have strangled the wretched man!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks PK!
Many hugs
Ami
What a great story Switchy and Turtle Dove. Really Enjoyed it. Thank yu. Thanks PK.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Ronnie
xx
That was a great story, thanks to the pair of you
ReplyDeletelove Jan.xx
Great story Switchy and Turtle Dove but I do believe that Jace owes Mel an apology...he was rude and jumped to conclusions. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks PK...have a great weekend.
Blessings,
Cat
Good story Switchy and Turtle Dove,but I agree with Cat, Jace could have granted a little mercy, at least listened before he began the spanking.
ReplyDeletegreat story - thanks for sharing :-)
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