Today we have a real treat for Fantasy Friday! I have had stories from people with all level of writing experience and we've loved them all, but today we have a professional writer! Renee Rose - Closet girl was kind enough to let us have an excerpt from the soon-to-be released novella Courting Celia (sequel to Loving Lucia). After you read here, head over there for more great reading and to find out about her books. For now, enjoy...
from, Courting Celia
The sisters Lucia and Celia made the rash and ill-advised decision to travel to Florence unattended, against the orders of Lucia's husband, Marco. Here's what happens when Lucia must face the music:
Lucia
got up and stood before her husband, pulling at her hands anxiously. After a year of marriage, she was no longer
afraid of him, feeling confident that his love for her was secure even when he
disciplined her. Even so, in the face of
punishment, her knees were weak and her belly was doing flips.
Marco looked at her, more
thoughtfully than angrily. Then he sat
in the chair and beckoned her to him. He
pulled her onto his lap and looked up at her.
“I couldn't let her go alone,” she said imploringly.
“You could have. Perhaps she would not have gone if you'd
refused. Or perhaps you could have
changed her mind.”
She chewed her lip and shook her
head. “I know her better than anyone,
Marco. She would have gone alone. I had to go with her.”
He shook his head. “You didn't have to.”
“And let her go alone?” she asked,
her voice rising with indignation.
Fortunately, the Count was more
amused than annoyed by it. The corner of
his mouth lifted just a bit. “Can you
not think of any other option?”
“No!” she exclaimed emphatically.
“No?”
She stared at him, not sure what he
wanted her to say.
“You could have told Tomi so that he
stopped her.”
She stared at him. Betraying her own sister had never been an
option for her. She shook her head
slowly. “I couldn't have.”
“Why not? It would have kept her safe. It would have kept you safe. And it would've kept me from punishing you.”
She chewed on her lip some
more. “You're asking me to betray my own
sister.”
He shrugged. “Betray is a harsh word. I'm asking you to make choices that will keep
you both safe, especially considering your pregnancy.”
“You're making me choose between my
sister or you.”
“Don't be so dramatic. I am asking you to make better choices for
the safety of my family, which includes my unborn child and your
sister. I don't think that's too much to
demand of you.”
She considered his words and her
shoulders sagged. He was right. She hadn't thought of trying to prevent Celia
from leaving. She had just followed
along on her twin's escapade, as she always did. She had expected punishment, but had been
resolved that she'd acted in the only manner she could have, under the
circumstances. Now she felt genuine
regret. “I'm sorry, Marco. You're right.”
Marco pushed her to stand and
unfastened his belt buckle. She drew in
her breath and her belly dropped, involuntarily. He folded her across his lap and peeled up
her skirts, baring her bottom. He ran
his hand over it with a caress and she relaxed a little, parting her legs, even
as her mind was preparing for the inevitable spanking. He spanked her with his hand first,
flattening her cheeks with his big palm, smacking first right and then left,
then middle, then the backs of her legs, which made her yelp. There was a pause and she held her breath,
listening. She heard the whisper of the
leather belt as he doubled it and then brought it cracking down on her
backside.
He went easy on her. He spanked for a while, but he did not strike
so very hard. Like Tomi and Celia, she
imagined he was afraid of harming the baby, though she knew perfectly well that
a sore bottom wasn't going to do any harm.
Still, she was grateful for the reprieve. He continued until her bottom was burning,
but didn't feel bruised. Then he rubbed
his hand over her heated flesh.
“You know what I like to do with
pretty red bottoms like this?” he asked and she heard the purr of sexual
interest in his voice.
“What?” she asked, recovering her
voice.
He pulled her up to standing and
stood himself, then bent her back over so her hands rested on the seat of the
chair. “Let me show you,” he said in a
husky voice.
“Marco,” she protested. “What if Tomi comes back?”
“It's this or another round with my belt,
which do you prefer?”
“This!” she squeaked.
He laughed. “I thought so.”
He rubbed his fingers between her
legs and she could tell she was already moist, as often happened when he
spanked her. She wriggled with pleasure
and pushed her hips back at him. He
chuckled and she heard the rustle of his pants as he lowered them just enough
to release his length. He pushed his sex
against hers, and she groaned, eager to take him into her. “Good girl,” he murmured and entered her
slowly, drawing himself all the way back out before he entered again. She sucked in her breath. He continued that way for a while, long slow
strokes that wound her need up tighter and tighter until she heard herself
saying, “Please?”
Marco chuckled again and grasped her
hips firmly, moving in her with more force and speed. “Oh yesssss,” she panted. He began moving her hips in a way that there
was a rubbing up and down in addition to his thrusts in and out and it
stimulated that feminine pearl of pleasure for her so that she started making
little cries of need until they climaxed together, her keening cry drowned out
by his loud groan.
He pulled out and spanked her
several more times, hard. She stayed in
position, waiting for permission to get up, listening as he pulled his trousers
back up and slid his belt back into place.
“Thank you,” she panted.
Marco pulled her to standing and
backed her up against the bed, pushing her to sit, then sweeping her legs up
over her head to expose her bottom to his view again. “You're a good wife to thank me for spanking
you,” he murmured, inspecting her still-burning cheeks. “This is a nice position, isn't it?” He slapped her vulnerable bottom several more
times, hard, and laughed as she tried to jerk her hips away and dodge his hand. “If you ever take a risk like that again,” he
said, punctuating each word with a sharp spank, “I will spank you to
tears.” In this position he could look
at her as he spanked, and he did so now, raising his eyebrows. “Capiche?”
She nodded quickly. “Capiche.”
He gave her several more hard
swats. You know what's particularly
delightful about this position?” he drawled.
“N-no,” she quavered.
“It highlights this little rosebud
so nicely,” he said, leaning over and planting a kiss on her sex.
“Oooh,” she let out her breath,
shakily.
“Do you like that?” he asked in a
low, husky voice.
“Yessss,” she breathed.
“Good, bambina. He used his tongue to tantalize her, moving
it up and down the entrance to her sex, then penetrating her opening with it. He brought her to three more climaxes and she
was nearly incoherent by the time he released her. He lowered her legs and leaned over and
kissed her. “I love you, tesoro mio.”
She sighed blissfully and stroked
his cheek. “I love you, too,” she murmured.
© Renee Rose and Blushing Books
Renee, thank you so very much for sharing this with us for our fantasy this week. I look forward to reading more of your work. And again I ask all of you - send a story, you can be a writing pro or this can be your first attempt, but you will find a friendly audience here. Send your story to elisspeaks@yahoo.com
Great story. Thanks for sharing and thank you Rene.
ReplyDeleteRR, Wonderful! I am a fan:)
ReplyDeletePK, have a great weekend doing whatever you like!
Thank you for hosting me, PK! And thank you, sunnygirl and SNP!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, reneerose!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed it:).
Love,
Kitty
Thanks for the great story reneerose and PK.
ReplyDeleteReneerose,
ReplyDeletevery nice, if I can download it to my Kindle, I will.
PK, way to go.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.
Love it Renee- heading over to download the books my self. Thanks PK
ReplyDeleterr,You know I love your stories, this one is great. We cannot wait until you finish!
ReplyDeletePK, What would we do without you? Enjoy the freedom to do your 'thing!'
Wonderful! Great sex and a fantastic spanking.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story! Also - love a pregnant character, as we have been spanking throughout my pregnancy (although, not much now it's the end) but still, with careful consideration, it can be done safely.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing as well.
Excellent story Renee Rose, really enjoyed it and great writing. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks PK. Enjoy time to yourself.
Love,
Ronnie
xx
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story reneerose. I do so wish I could write details like you and most of the other writers, I just don't think that will ever happen, oh well.
ReplyDeletePK have a great solo weekend.
Thank you for reading, everyone, I appreciate it! Stay tuned for another section on Spanky's Bright Bottom a week from Sunday...
ReplyDeleteNice story...thanks
ReplyDeleteGreat story, thanks!
ReplyDelete