Friday, March 21, 2008

Fantasy Friday - I'll Be There


I know this is a holiday weekend but I really hope everyone will take the time to read Fantasy Friday before heading out on vacation. This is one that is going to speak to many of us. So many in fact that it was hard to narrow down the people who could have written it. Enjoy your read and be sure to vote!

I’ll Be There



"Linda, come here, lets have a talk." Jake said from the bedroom.

"Coming!" Linda called cheerfully. As she walked into the bedroom, she stopped short, seeing Jake on the bed with several implements near him. "What's going on? Are we going to have some fun?"

"Not this time. Remember our conversation a few weeks ago about wanting discipline? About dieting? About the diet group you wanted to join? Where was that… Todd and Suzy’s?"

"Well, yes, but.."

"And I said we'd try it here first, then, you could join. Well, if I remember right, you didn't loose this week and you asked me to try to start up a DD lifestyle using this as our starting point… right?"

"Well… yes, but …"

"Nope, too late, the only 'but' I want to see is yours over my lap, please. Oh, and you can loose that pretty little thong you're wearing, you won't be needing it."

Blushing, Linda carefully removed her thong, making sure she didn't reveal anything under her dress. Then slowly laid herself across his lap, not sure exactly what to expect, and trying hard to remember what she had told him she wanted several weeks earlier.

"Now, Linda," He started as he slowly lifted her skirt over her hips, and began to gently rub her gorgeous butt. "We're going to do this right from the start. This isn't going to be an erotic spanking, no nice warm-up, or rubbing and touching in between. You are going to answer with ‘Yes Sir’ as well. Do you understand?"

"mmmm… yes sir" she cooed loving the nice rub on her bottom. Still not sure how this was all going to work, fearing and hoping that it truly would be their first discipline spanking.

"Why are we here?" he asked quietly.

"Because I gained weight this week, sir." She responded.

SMACK! "Nope. Wrong answer. " Jake replied.

"What?"

"You're here because you made some bad decisions that caused you to gain weight. Correct? .. oh and don't forget the ‘Sir’ please, I don't want to have to add anything to what you already have coming" he reminded her gently.

"Yes sir. Bad decisions"

"What were those decisions?"

"um.. well, I don't really know…" she started. SMACK SMACK SMACK came his hand.

"OK, OK!" She frantically started. "Sir, I did too much snacking at the vending machines. I was good at home, but at work, not as careful"

Gently rubbing he asked. "Was that it? Just some snacking at the vending machines? No big lunches out with girlfriends, nothing at night?"

"Well…." SMACK "ok, ok! Yes, I went out a few times at lunch too. It is so hard to order light stuff when we go really good places sir!"

"Why do you need to do that? What did the doctor say that caused you to ask for these spankings?"

"please Jake, I know…." SMACK SMACK SMACK he rained down a thirty second volley of spanks with his hand. It was starting to sting his hand he realized.

She caught her breath wanting to rub away the sting. "Ok, he said I needed to eat more healthily and try to loose about 30 lbs. sir."

"And? "

"Please Jake sir isn't that enough?"

"No. You've got to say and understand what else he said. You need to face it, not try to ignore it; your life and my life as we have it now are at stake. Come on."

Sighing, with tears beginning to flood her eyes, she quietly whispered, "he said I'm borderline diabetic, and if I don't change, I could end up with full blown diabetes.”

"That's right, both of us need to change, I want you to say it again, this time louder."

Crying more now, "Because I'm a borderline diabetic sir."

"Right, and we're going to work together to make sure that doesn't happen. If it does anyway, we'll deal with it, but it is NOT going to be because you wanted to eat fattier, less healthy foods when you go out with your girlfriends. You ARE going to make good choices next week." With that he started her spanking in earnest. After using his hands a few minutes more, he paused, pushed her forward slightly, and scissored her legs. Sighing to himself he resolved that he could do this despite shaking and feeling sad, he was resolved. She asked for it and this was for their own good.

He picked up the hairbrush. Rubbing it on her butt, he asked "Linda do you know what is going to happen next? I'm going to use the hairbrush. I will use this every time we end up here. I love you more than anything in the world. I want you to be healthy. We can make this change together. I will eat just as healthy. Do you understand?"

Crying gently, she answered him. "Yes sir"

He began with the hairbrush. Linda began to fight, she had never felt anything this hard before, reaching back she tried to stop it, but he just grabbed her hand and pulling it into the small of her back pulled her tighter against him. She was crying and almost beyond where she thought she could take. Suddenly she felt exhausted, she could fight no more. She just laid and sobbed. Soon Jake stopped. He dropped the brush and scooped her up into his arms. With tears in his eyes, he hugged her for all he was worth. "Oh, Linda, I love you so much, I love you I love you. It's ok. It's ok."

Slowly her crying slowed. She looked into his eyes love radiating out at him. "Oh Jake, I'm sorry, I'll make better choices I promise."

"I know honey, I'm here to help you to support you whatever you need. I promise I'll be there every step of the way."

And he was. They did join the diet group after some discussion, and decided they both would join. This way, he could be with her every step of the way. Over time, they lost together, grew closer to each other, and much healthier together. Discipline did slowly become a part of their relationship with all its ups and downs, yet together they worked as a team making the whole truly stronger than the two parts.


So how many of you can relate? Here are your choices, it could be Jessica, it could be Lori, it could be Carye or it could be me or it could be an anonymous writer this week. I mean you know the four of us are all in the Todd and Suzy's diet group so it sure could have been one of us but it could also be someone who is not quite ready to ask yet and this is how they want it to go. Please vote! It is so much fun to watch how it goes.







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Who wrote "I'll Be There"

Jessica
Lori
Carye
PK
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Written by PK at 7:27 PM

8 comments

8 Comments:

At 2:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm a long-time lurker, but a first time commenter. I really enjoyed this story. I, personally, am not into discipline, but I really liked that the love between them was clear, and that Jake made it clear that he was spanking her for making poor decisions and choosing not to eat healthy foods, not just because she gained weight. What a great way to confront the action without damaging her self-esteem. I know who I think wrote it - can't wait to see if I'm right...

-Belle

 
At 6:57 AM, Blogger david said...

Hey Belle welcome out of lurking. You will love this blog and Pk puts alot of effort into it.

P.S. A great story to start the weekend.

*hugs and grins*

 
At 8:12 AM, Blogger Paul said...

PK, thanks, great story, this time no real idea.
Have a wonderful week-end.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.

 
At 9:48 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hmmm...this is a tough one. I voted one way but I do believe I am wrong!

This weight loss business. Geez, I am absolutely struggling. I can't seem to crawl out of the hole.

Debbie :)

 
At 5:11 PM, Blogger Theresa said...

I loved Belle's insight here. I hope she comments some more!

I voted. I know I am wrong. I am always wrong. I don't care. I love FF!

Huggs
Theresa

 
At 10:03 PM, Blogger mthc said...

Boy that could be any of the choices..Good story!

 
At 3:27 AM, Blogger Jessica said...

That darn diet thing is the cause of many sore bottoms for me!
-Jess

 
At 9:25 PM, Blogger Terpsichore said...

ahh...struggling with weight loss...I can relate...I know my husband would not consider the spanking diet...but sometimes I do wonder if it would help... :-)

 

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