Like much of the eastern part of the nation we're bracing for quiet a winter storm. We're used to getting a little snow in the winter, but even down here in the south they predict nearly a foot. Then again, 'they' nearly always get it wrong. We'll see, but school is closed for today anyway and I'm thrilled about that!
Today's story is very special to me. It's from one of our new bloggers and a good friend of mine! It comes from Lindy, who writes Downunder Dreaming. She hasn't written tons of fiction before but I can tell she has some great stories in her. I hope she'll be sharing more. Please enjoy...
January Door (butt) Buster Sales!
Lizzie
had heard on the morning weather report that it was going to be an extremely
hot summers day, typical of their part of Australia. She was already in a bad mood before leaving home
and Nat warned her several times to
behave with a few hard swats. Everyone seemed to flock to shopping centres to
enjoy their air conditioning and avoid days like this. The shops were over
crowded with people going silly for a good bargain at the door buster sales in
January.
Nat
and Lizzie met their family early to try grab some once a year bargains. The girls had all been at each other’s
throats all morning, the grandkids running riot around the shops. One daughter wanted to go to a shop on one
level whilst the other wanted to go in a different direction. They also fought over who was buying a
particular item and kept snatching it from the others hands.
Lizzie wasn’t helping either by being loud mouthed and swearing like a fishwife.
Nat was at the end of his tether. As he stood
in line to be served in the food court, he kept being distracted by his own
family making a terrible scene and his blood pressure was on the rise. His palm was becoming very itchy as he
noticed how his usually placid wife acted. Once he was served he made his way over to a
table and immediately summoned everyone over to join him. They all protested that they wanted to stay
on the bigger table, but Nat insisted they move to one just big enough to seat
them all.
Lizzie started throwing a tantrum, so Nat said
to their daughters. “Your mum and I will be back in a minute.” With that he grabbed Lizzie by the hand and
dragged her behind him in the direction of the toilets.
“Where
are you taking me?” Lizzie asked getting annoyed about being treated like a
naughty child.
Nat
was really angry, “We have a matter which needs urgent attention before we can
continue our lunch in harmony.”
Lizzie
was shocked that Nat would even consider spanking her whilst they were in public. So she tried digging in her feet so she wouldn’t
budge.
Nat turned to Lizzie saying, “This
is happening whether you like it or not.
I’m just as prepared to take you over my knee here in front of everyone
if you don’t comply.”
They
reached the family toilet where Nat lowered the seat, then told
Lizzie to take her jeans and panties down.
She was about to protest when he continued “You either do it voluntarily
or if I do it I’ll take my belt off. Is that what you want?”
Lizzie
was horrified and said “But everyone will hear us, you can’t spank me here.”
Nat
wouldn’t listen though and started giving Lizzie the count down. “Five, four, three.” She swiftly took down her jeans and panties
ready for what came next.
Nat
flipped her over his knee and briskly started spanking her whilst giving her a
lecture. “You SPANK will not SPANK, SPANK behave like that SPANK, SPANK, SPANK, in public SPANK, SPANK, SPANK. Do you hear me young lady?”
“Yes
Sir! Please no more my bottom is on
fire.”
“I’m
going to make sure you learn you lesson.
You’re acting as bad as our grandchildren.”
Nat
continued spanking until Lizzies bottom was fire engine red and felt like it
would combust. Lizzie was blubbering
how she was sorry and would behave for the rest of the day.
Nat stood her up and said “That’s only a
taste of what’s to come young lady. When
we arrive home I want you to go straight to our bedroom and be prepared for
your proper punishment.”
Lizzie couldn’t believe this and protested “PLEASE that’s
so unfair you have already punished me.”
Lizzie pulled up her pants over her very sore bottom,
dancing around trying to ease the pain.
They
returned to their family to eat lunch. Lizzie
was sitting gingerly on the seat, squirming around trying to get comfortable.
Both of their daughters wondered what had happened, as now their mum seemed
very calm compared to before.
After
lunch they continued shopping until they were all exhausted, then all went
their separate ways. The drive home was very quiet as Lizzie was thinking about
her further punishment and Nat was too busy concentrating on the heavy
traffic. Once they arrived home Nat told
Lizzie to go straight up to their room.
She
obeyed him, went up, undressed and knelt by the bed waiting for Nat to come
in. Lizzie hated having to wait for her
punishment and had huge butterflies in her tummy in anticipation.
Nat
unpacked the car and placed everything in its rightful place before heading
into the bedroom. He was pleased to see Lizzie had done exactly what he had asked
waiting
for his attention.
He
walked around to his side of the bed to retrieve the implements he intended
using, placed them on the bed, then called Lizzie over to kneel between his
legs.
“Now
young lady you know why you are being
punished?”
“Yes Sir! I misbehaved whilst shopping and threw a
tantrum like a spoilt brat as well as disobeying you.”
“Exactly
although I gave you a spanking at the shops it was a quick reminder to behave for the rest of the
afternoon. I’m giving
you the proper punishment you deserve and I certainly don’t want my sweet wife
acting like a fishwife ever again. Is that understood?”
Lizzie
was already starting to cry and with a shaky voice answered “Yes, Sir.”
With
that he helped settle Lizzie over his
knee. He started with a hand spanking to
warm up her bottom, then moved onto the wooden paddle. It didn’t take long for
Lizzie to be squirming around trying to avoid the splats of the paddle, before
long she was ouching and owwing. So Nat held her tighter into him as he
proceeded to give her what she deserved.
He moved onto using the leather strap.
Lizzie was soon begging for mercy and
apologising. “Please stop, I can’t take anymore I promise to be good.”
Nat
kept on though until Lizzie was sobbing and limp
over his knee. He knew then that she was
accepting her punishment. He gave her at
least another ten harder spanks before he stopped. He scooped her up into his arms where she
buried her face in his shirt. Lizzie kept saying
over and over again how she was sorry.
Nat said “You’re forgiven now honey, but I
don’t want a repeat of that behaviour ever again.”
After
Lizzie had recovered enough they both prepared a delicious dinner. They discussed the events of the day whilst
dining and giggled at their daughter’s reactions when they returned to the
table.
“What should I say if either one asks me what
happened?” Lizzie asked.
“Tell them the truth, they could both
certainly do with a bit of DD/TTWD in their marriages.
It’s obvious how happy we are with each other and look how long we’ve been
married. Hopefully it would improve both of their marriages. They certainly act
like brats and demand way too much from their husbands.” Nat replied.
Lizzie
and Nat decided not to bother with door (butt) buster sales ever again as the
crowds were too much to cope, especially on hot days. Better to shop on line sipping cool drinks
whilst relaxing. Leave the shopping
centre chaos to the younger generations to enjoy.
~o~
I told you she did a great job! Lindy thank you so much for sharing with us. Enjoy the comments then get back to writing! Please everyone - I do need more stories. Please think of writing and and send your stories to elisspeaks@yahoo.com
Wonderful story Lindy, I enjoyed reading this and hope you will write more:) I dedetest crowds and don't think I would have been much better than Lizzie lol.
ReplyDeleteThank you PK for bringing us another wonderful FF. Hope the weather isn't as bad as predicted.
Hugs
Roz
Thanks Roz, I'm not fan of busy shopping centres especially during sales.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
Hi Lindy, great story, We went to the sales in a nearby city. I went in one shop and had a panic attack. Came straight home and hubby cheered me up with a spanking for wasting the day!!
ReplyDeleteI hope the weather is just bad enough to keep school shut PK, ;)
love Jan,xx
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DeleteHi Jan, I can imagine having a panic attack too. Glad John cheered you up with a spanking. LOL!
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
Lindy, a great story. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks. I hope you write more for us.
ReplyDeleteThank you PK. Hope the weather isn't too bad.
Love,
Ronnie
xx
Thanks Ronnie. Will try to write more in the near future.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
I'm glad you didn't delete this one Lindy! I gave up going to the January sales years ago, far too stressful.
ReplyDeleteI hate snow PK, hope you don't get too much of it. Snowfall in New York looked bad on the news this morning.
Rosie xx
Thanks Rosie, not game to delete any more stories. PK will be dobbing me in to Bear again. LOL!
DeleteHave a good weekend
Hugs Lindy
Wow, Lindy! A new author among us. And a really great story. Thanks for the Friday Fun.
ReplyDeletePK, bunker down and stay safe. Winter sucks.
Ella
Thanks Ella that's a lovely compliment. Not up there with our friends though and don't think I ever will be.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
This was great Lindy I hope you write another story soon.
ReplyDeleteI know how much you hate having a day off PK, so sorry. haha
Thanks Sunny, will get onto the next story as soon as possible.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
Great story! I agree, I do not go to the sales anymore
ReplyDeletejean
Thanks Jean. Best to avoid all shopping centres during the busy times.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs LIndy
Lindy, this was a wonderful story!! Thank you. I am not crazy about shopping, especially that kind! Ugh!
ReplyDeletePK stay cozy! You had a good week! Lol!
Thanks Minelle, I hate big shopping centres especially in their busy periods.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
Thanks for sharing a fun story, Lindy...looking forward to more. :)
ReplyDeleteHope you stay warm and safe, PK.
Hugs and blessings...Cat
Thanks Cat, will write again soonish.
DeleteHave a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
Thanks PK for allowing me to write another Fantasy Friday, it was so much fun. Already started writing down another story, as was awake again last night with insomnia.
ReplyDeleteHope your weather improves, but at least you get another long weekend.
Have a good weekend.
Hugs Lindy
lindy...what a great story..and one i can picture in my mind. Glad your muse is with you...looking forward to the next one.
ReplyDeletehugs abby
Thanks Abby. It is an easy one to picture during a sale.
DeleteHugs Lindy
Lindy! This was awesome. I especially liked hearing about the hot day as we are freezing right now. Summer in Australia, right? Enjoy it. The snow is piled high here! Amy
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy. Yes summer time over here but weird weather. Way too hot for short periods then back to cooler so we can't acclimatise.
DeleteHope you stay warm and safe with the snow.
Hugs Lindy
thanks PK and Lindy. shopping any time of year can turn the moods of people. great story Hugs
ReplyDeleteIt sure can thanks Terps. Its one thing I try to avoid.
DeleteHugs Lindy