Friday, July 01, 2011

Fantasy Friday - Making Wine, II

Happy Friday! And happy nearly 4th of July. Friday is time for another great story and we have one for you. Today’s story is from a brand new writer with great potential, more about her later.

For now enjoy…



Making Wine

Kira was sitting in the car with a scarf around her eyes as a blindfold. Her heart was pounding with every turn that Victor made. She could tell that they were going up the mountain, but she had no idea why. He told her not to make any plans for today because he wanted to treat her to a day of relaxation.

Earlier, he made her shower and shave before setting a white sundress on the bed for her, nothing else. Kira was very intrigued. They were childhood sweethearts and he was a guy that rarely took chances without calculating all the risks first. His choice of clothing for her was one that she had worn a few times before but it had never been his idea. When she dressed, they both walked down to the car. Victor drove down to the supermarket and as he opened the door for her, she started panicking.

“I thought this was supposed to be a day for me to relax.”

“Kira, just trust me today. Completely let go and I promise that by the end of the day, you’ll feel like jello, alright?”

Kira nodded and Victor helped her out of the car. Even though it wasn’t Kira’s first time in public without panties, it was always a thrill. Her breath was quickening as they walked across the parking lot and into the store. Victor slowly browsed the fruits section while Kira hung to him tightly. He would pick things up and then put it down. Kira was nervous because she was wearing just a white dress with sandals. She kept thinking that everyone could see that she wasn’t wearing anything underneath.

“What are you looking for? Maybe I can help.”

“I’m looking to make some wine. I think I want some grapes. Go ask the clerk there what types of grapes are best for wines and have him help you pick some out.”

“What? I’m not going to do that. You don’t even drink wine. Why won’t you tell me what were doing today?”

“Everything is gonna be fine. Just go ask him to help you pick out some grapes. We don’t need a lot. I’ll be waiting for you in the car.” He handed her enough money for a bag of grapes and started to walk out the store.

Kira stood there dumbfounded. She had no idea what Victor was up to and why he had decided to do this. She had mentioned some of the things that she did in the past similar to this but Victor had never shown any interest. Victor always seemed apathetic to anything she suggested that was out of the norm. She was always content when she was with him but there was always an itch for a little more. As she stood there, she was scared but excited at the same time. She wanted to go forward and just let go. It had always been a challenge to forget about the world and allow herself to focus on the present. She watched as Victor disappeared out of sight.

Kira started looking around for someone to help her with what Victor wanted. She had told him of some of her past adventures so she knew what he wanted her to do during this shopping trip. She found a clerk stacking oranges into a mountain. She watched him for a while and finally decided to overcome the butterflies swirling around in her stomach.

She grabbed an orange, but she wasn’t watching and the tower started crumbling down on her. She tried to stop it, but the oranges kept on fall.

“Miss, are you okay?”

“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to destroy al of your work. Here, let me help you.” Kira started grabbing oranges and putting them back onto the stand.

“It’s okay Miss. Let me gather everything up.” Within minutes, they both caught all the runaway oranges and placed them back onto the stand. “Thank you, Miss.”

The clerk didn’t notice before, but now that he looked up, he saw that Kira wasn’t wearing a bra and both her breasts were showing when she bent over. Kira immediately recognized the look on his face. She got up to try to hide as much as she could and she was flushing red. The clerk stood up and could barely get out, “Is there anything I can help you with?”

“My boyfriend wants to make some wine, but I don’t know how to pick out the best grapes.”

“There over here, do you know what kind of wine he wants?”

“Uhh…I’m not sure but he usually likes something that has a slight sour taste yet sweet at the same time. Do you know what I mean?”

He clearly didn’t, but he wanted he found that he just couldn’t pull himself away from her. “Sure, I think these would be great.” He pointed to some red grapes. “Try one.” He pulled a piece off the bunch, wiped it on his apron, and fed it to her. Kira had a burning desire to run out the store because it was getting to be too much for her. She took a deep breath and decided to finish. She ate the grape and picked out a bad. She kissed the clerk on the cheek to thank him and ran to the checkout stand to pay for the grapes.

When she was done, she ran into the parking out and to the car. She thought that her head was going to explode. Victor was there with the door open for her and she jumped in. He had a huge grin on his face and watched as she slowly calmed down.

“So, how’d you do?”

“That was freakin' insane. I made a mess by knocking down all the oranges and then he saw my boobs before I even asked for his help.” Victor listened as Kira recounted the whole ordeal. Kira didn’t know it, but Victor had planned everything in advance and watched everything unfold. The oranges falling was something that sweetened the scene for him.

“Are you ready to make some wine?”

“Here? I don’t know how.”

“Lift up your dress” Kira was excited but scared at the same time. What if someone walked passed their car. They would be able to see the two of them in the front with her dress up. Victor slowly slid his hands down to the hem of the dress and moved his hands up to her pussy. She was wet. He knew that she loved taking chances but he couldn’t imagine how something like this would make her so wet. He slowly started stroking her and she began to shake. She was enjoying his finger and was building up when he suddenly stopped. She opened her eyes and was frustrated. “You got the wrong grapes honey. I can’t make wine with these, they’re red and I need the green ones.” Kira’s face dropped. She was telling herself that there was no way she was going to go back in. In the past, she had been willing to do this because she told herself that she would never see the clerk again.

“No Victor. I can’t. I can’t face the clerk again. Please, tell me what we’re doing.”

“Sweetie, you can do this. You know that deep deep down you really want to do this.” His finger slid up her dress again. “You want to go in and get some green grapes.” He started circling her swelling pussy and she started to squirm. “How about if I go in with you? We’ll get that nice clerk to help you pick out the perfect grapes.”

“I don’t want to see that clerk again. Can’t we just use the ones I bought?” On one hand, Kira really didn’t want to go in to buy more grapes. But on the other hand, she wanted the thrill of the adventure Victor was leading her on. She was liking this but it didn’t mean that she wasn’t completely nervous at the same time.

“Of course not. I need the perfect grapes to make the best wine for us to share. Let’s go.” He pulled his fingers away from her and led her back into the market. They returned the grapes and went back to the produce section. They spotted the clerk who was bright red upon seeing Kira again. Kira was also blushing and trying as hard as possible to hide behind Victor.

“How can I help you guys today?”

“Kira, I think you should ask him since you guys already know each other.” She shot Victor a look of venom because she had not expected that. Victor slowly eased her up to the clerk so that he could watch her shift. He could tell that she was nervous, but at the same time, he knew that she was going to enjoy the day. The part that was exciting him was that the more nervous Kira became, the more she moved and showed without realizing it.

“Um…er…do you have any green grapes?”

“Yes we do. They’re right over here. Will these be good?” He handed a bunch of large green grapes to Kira. His hands were shaking and almost dropped the bunch. He couldn’t tear his eyes away from her. “They just came in today and they’re on sale. I don’t know if it makes good wine, but they are very tasty. They have a sweetness to them and they’re so juicy so then they have more juice for your wine.”

“These do look great but do you have anything a little firmer?” Victor wanted to help the clerk out by stopping him from rambling further. “We need some that won’t break easily.” The clerk still couldn’t stop staring at Kira. This made Kira squirm even and she would to just grab a bunch to get out of the market. Kira couldn’t help but think that the clerk was staring right through her dress and drooling over her breasts. The clerk handed Kira another bunch. He was so nervous himself that he could no longer get any words out. His mouth moved but nothing was coming out. He pulled off a few grapes, wiped it on his apron and popped some into his mouth. He handed the rest of the handful to Kira and Victor. He knew he wasn’t supposed to but he needed something to fill his mouth. “Is it okay if my girlfriend and I wash these before we buy them?” The clerk nodded and pointed to the restroom.

Kira and Victor went to the restroom and locked the door behind them. Kira was shaking because she could not believe the events that unfolded. She was confused but at the same time, a part of her was enjoying the thrill of what they were doing. She wasn’t sure what Victor was planning and she was getting agitated that he wouldn’t tell her. Victor was putting on a brave face because he wanted this to be a special day for Kira. Although it had been exciting to do something out of the norm, he really wanted to just get her alone for the rest of the day. He knew that Kira had an exhibition streak in her that she used to explore; it wasn’t something that he was particularly thrilled about. At the same time, he wanted to show her that he was willing to share things with her that he though she enjoyed. The both carefully washed the grapes and put them back into the bags. When they stepped out, Victor gave the clerk a handshake and they went to pay for the grapes. Victor took his time to walk to the car, but Kira wanted to run. They got into the car and Victor rolled down the window.

“How are you doing?”

“That was so scary back there, but I’m alright.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah, it’s just that…that wasn’t what I expected. You’re always nervous about taking public risks but you do something like that. I...I never knew you would do that, and then making me go in again. I was about to stop…but I’m glad we did that.”

“So it was good?”

“Totally.”

“Okay then. You have to trust me with this next thing. I’m going to bring you to a place where we’re all alone and I can do whatever I want to. You can yell and no one will hear you. Do you trust me?”

“……yeah.”

“You have to put this on as a blindfold. Do you still want to go? We can stop this right now if you feel uncomfortable.”

Sigh. Kira looked into Victor’s eyes and finally nodded. Victor smiled and carefully put the scarf around Kira’s eyes. She was scared but at the same time, she knew Victor wasn’t going to put her in harms way. Victor started up the car and started driving. Kira could hear the sounds of the cars around them. She felt every bump in the road and stop that they made. After a while, the sounds started getting quieter and there were more twists and turns.

“Where are we going?”

“Shh…You’ll find out when we get there. I don’t want to spoil the surprise so no more talking alright?”

“Ok.” Ten minutes later, “I need to talk. It’s too quiet. Please say something.”

“Would you feel better if I turned on the radio?” Victor was afraid that he would ruin the surprise if he talked.

“Yeah.” Victor was driving up the local mountains and Kira could feel every turn. Every second, she had an urge to pull the scarf down to see where they were going. After a while, the road became very bumpy and then smoothed out. After an hour, the car stopped. Victor opened the door, grabbed a duffel bag, put the grapes inside. He went over and opened the door for Kira.

“Close your eyes.” Victor slowly took off the scarf. “Now open them slowly before you get out.” After Kira adjusted her eyes to the light, Victor helped her out. There was no one around. It was completed wooded and they had used a dirt trail to get where they were. At the same time, it was very peaceful to get away from all the noise and distractions of the city. Now, there were the sounds of the forest and the beauty of nature around them. “You see that platform there. That’s where we’re hiking to.” It was a small white crate that was sticking out of the mountain and the dirt road didn’t reach it. It was a short hike where Kira could feel the breeze blowing up her dress. She felt strange to be out here with so little on. She was an avid hiker so she usually was dressed in full gear with a pack when she went to the mountains. She didn’t know exactly where they were, but she had a good idea of the general location. She knew that most people didn’t go past the first set of mountains and they were deep into the second range of peaks.

When they got to the platform, Victor turned Kira around. She was struck by the view before her. She could see the entire city while the forest surrounded all around her.

Victor opened his bag and laid down a blanket and let Kira sit down. They sat for a while to take in their surroundings. Kira had forgotten about her nervousness and just relaxed and she sat with Victor. There was a sense of security that she had when she was around Victor that she had not felt in a long time.

“It’s time for us to get started. Let’s take this dress off of you first.” With one swoop, Victor had undressed Kira. It happened so fast that Kira gave a shiver and crossed her arms. The sun was out and Kira started to get butterflies in her stomach again. “Relax, dear. I promise you’ll enjoy this.” Kira nodded. Victor laid Kira down on the blanket and quietly whispered to her so that she could calm down.

“I think it’s time to make some wine.” He kissed Kira until she couldn’t breathe anymore and she closed her eyes. Her mind was buzzing and Victor was kissing his way down to her pussy. He kissed her lips and ran his tongue over them until they started to grow. She started to squirm under his tongue as he continued to moisten her lips. Victor blew over the lips and Kira began to moan. As soon as Victor stopped, Kira’s eyes flew open.

“How long have we known each other?”

“What do you mean?”

“When did you first lay those beady little eyes on me?”

“When my family moved next to yours when I was four. What’s this all about?”

“Hmm… Eighteen plus eighteen. That’s thirty six. Just keep that number in mind.”

“Come on, Victor. Tell me.”

“Close your eyes.”

“First, you undress. I want something to keep in my mind.”

Victor undressed and motioned for Kira to close her eyes. Kira sighed but closed her eyes because she was enjoying herself.

Victor slowly slipped a grape through Kira’s lips and one into her mouth. He kissed her lips and made he twinge. With each grape, Victor would kiss her lips and reassure her. When he got to five, he continued sucking her lips until she was moaning and trembling. Kira tried to stay still but she couldn’t help but squirm. Victor held her down by her hips and didn’t let her escape his ministrations. Right when she about to let go, Victor stopped, blew on the lips and let her rest for a while. Victor kissed Kira on the mouth and made sure that she could taste her juices.
“How do you like our wine so far?”

“Perfect.”

“Do you want more?” Kira nodded and Victor continued sliding the grapes into her pussy. With each one, it would become more difficult for Victor to slide the grapes in. Kira was feeling the tightness as Victor put the tenth one in. “No more. I’m full.” Victor once again started sucking her lips and run her his tongue all along her slit. Victor was growing hard and was enjoying himself immensely. Kira became more vocal as Victor continued on. She knew she was close and her legs were squeezing his head. Victor could sense that it would take Kira just a few seconds more before she reached her climax so he stopped. Kira could feel that Victor had stopped but the spasms in her legs too a while to stop enough so that she could relax her legs. Victor got up to take a large gulp of air and then kissed Kira so that she could taste her juices again. Kira was frustrated and wanted to reach her climax. She reached down to stroke herself, but Victor held them firm against the ground. They were both wanted more so Victor continued with the grapes.

“It looks like I can fit just a little more in here.”

“Oh, man! I’m a ready to explode. Just let me finish already.”

“Nope. We’re gonna finish making this wine first.”

Victor slid in another grape and licked her again. He started to give her more attention elsewhere and rubbed her legs and arms.

“Do you think you can fit any more?” She shook her head. “How about just one more?” Kira looked at Victor and wanted to say no but she knew he wanted to keep going. She nodded and slowly pushed the last one in. Kira felt tight but at the same time it didn’t hurt too much. Victor used his fingers to finally bring Kira to a climax and she shuddered the whole time. He cupped his hands in an attempt to catch her juices. When she calmed down, Victor fed her the juice and went down again. He tried to suck as much of her “wine” as he could and take out the grapes. When he could no longer take them out with his tongue, he fished them out with his fingers. He counted them as he was taking them out to make sure that there was none left behind. Victor left them to the side in a pile and started on his next plan. Kira laid there and her mind was floating in the air.

“Kira, you remember thirty six?” It took her a while, but finally nodded. “I was expecting to make enough wine out of thirty six grapes.”

“But there’s no way!”

“Don’t argue with me. I think that there should be consequences for your miscount. I think this should do.” Victor pulled out a wooden spoon and grinned. He knew from the beginning that she would be far from the mark. He was actually surprised that she was able to fit that many into her because the grapes he chose were pretty big. Kira laughed as she saw it because she has tried to get Victor to spank her in the past and he would not spank her very hard. Victor motioned for her to turn over and she quickly complied.

“Well, since you were so far from the mark. I think I should just give you the full thirty six.”

“There was no way. Come on, Victor. Don’t you think that’s a bit excessive?” Kira didn’t know why she was arguing because she knew that Victor would not spank her very hard.

“Excessive? I think excessive would be if I was to say thirty six for each cheek. You know. I think that’s exactly what I’m going to do and I don’t want any argument.” The tone in his voice told Kira that it wouldn’t be a good idea.

Victor placed the spoon on her butt cheeks and started to rub them with it. Suddenly, Victor smacked down hard on her left cheek and a pink circle started to form. Kira gasped as that was not what she expected. Victor ran the spoon over her right cheek and when Kira started to relax, he smacked her cheek and another pink circle formed. Very slowly Victor would run the spoon over the cheek and smack her. By the time each side got ten, Kira was in a frenzy. Not knowing when the next smack would fall made her antsy but Victor had told her not to move. She would squirm but Victor would make her get back into place. By 30, Kira was beyond coherent. She had gone into a different world and she was flying high. She barely felt the sting of the spoon anymore. Her bottom had turned bright red, but she could only feel a burning warmth that enveloped her whole body.

At last Victor finished. It took Kira a long time to realize it. After that, Victor slowly entered Kira and lay with her the entire time. When they were done, they laid in the sun for a while until Victor started getting sunburned.

~~o0o~~


I think this was a perfect story for this warm weekend. This story came from a first time writer – Diana. Diana and I used to email, I haven't heard from her in a while. As I said this is her first attempt at writing sex/spanking fiction and I think she did a great job. I hope she is still writing and get in touch again.

I am looking for new stories all the time. Everyone is welcomed to join in the fun! If you have a story you are willing to share – real life or fiction, please send it to elisspeaks@yahoo.com

Thanks again Diana! Hope to see more of you both in writing stories and in comments.

Labels:

Written by PK at 12:05 AM

6 comments

6 Comments:

At 5:37 AM, Blogger Florida Dom said...

PK: Congrats that you have found another good new writer. Diana, your story was very erotic and well written and I am sure all of PK's readers are eager to write more of them. And Diana, I'm am sure you will spend your weekend clicking on to read the comments. I hope you get a lot of positive feedback and that it will encourage you to write more.

FD

 
At 8:50 AM, Blogger Paul said...

PK, an excellent story.
Diana, I hope that you will continue to write.
Love and warm hugs,
Paul.

 
At 9:32 AM, Blogger ronnie said...

Diana, enjoyed your story enormously, thank you. I hope you will write more.

Thanks PK.

Love,
Ronnie
xx

 
At 1:24 AM, Anonymous Antoinette said...

Wow.. For a new writer, Diana, you're pretty good!

I hope to read more of your stories. Please send more. :)

Thanks PK for posting, by the way.

 
At 2:11 PM, Blogger Michelle Carlyle said...

Yay, Diana! What a great story! Loved it! I hope you write more soon!

Thanks PK, for posting!

Hugs to you both,
Michelle

 
At 9:05 PM, Blogger Terpsichore said...

Nice stoyr...thanks! It has been a while since I have been able to visit hear and read for leasure...summer fun! :-) Best wishes, Terpsichore

 

Post a Comment

<< Home


Photobucket
This Site Best Viewed in Firefox